Critiques? Advice? Anybody? :P

[Allen]

So snap to, 4 AM, just woke up, bored out of my mind, doing a little bit of research on wikipedia for kicks and giggles. Come upon this little section in the Dolph Lundgren article about his house being broken into. COMIC IDEA! Apparently three people broke into his house, tied up his wife and kids, then promptly left when they realized whose house they were robbing. In comes the He-Man joke. I realize this comic won't be exactly politically correct, but the idea of it... well, it made me laugh so hard I decided to do it. I can't draw for crap, but this idea is just too good not to. So I go to wal mart, pick up a pad and pencils, and get to drawing. My results so far are less than insipiring, but basically the premise is me and my best friend irl discussing the break-in with a He-Man scenario involved. Here's a couple of tries of us sitting in our respective chairs playing a game.

EDIT: Added in a doodle of dolph turning into he-man that I did :P

Well, it's one of the attempts, with one closeup cuz my scanner decided it knew what I wanted to do and started arguing with me.

Critiques? Advice? Anybody? :P