Choosing a scene for submissions...

[Barb Jacobs]

I thought I would put this out there to you dear readers-

is there a five or so page sequence in Xylia (or two) that you think would grab an agent more than any other?

I was thinking about compiling a scene or two into a pdf and sending those along with my submission. I would love to get your thoughts on what scene or scenes you think pack the most punch- are the most intriguing, or would grab the attention of someone best.

Thanks muchly!
~B

[Francisco]

My personal choice is the sequence stating: [url]http://xyliatales.com/02112008/[/url]. It gives a tantalising hint of what's going on and, given how much has happened since, doesn't really give any spoilers.